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a beautiful city in china In china, there are many place worth us to visit. Such as in my hometown. My hometown in HeYuan city, GongDong province. It is located in the south china city. HY has many beautiful places and cultures. HY is a collecting with KeJia culture. For example, In july 14 kejia people always cook special food for gust whose come from faraway and firing some paper for their ancestor. As that day is a ghost. And other cultures are worth to see. In addtion, KeJia city also has many classical buildings. Such as lung wai housing and other buildings. HY has many delicious food and nature place. Welcome to my hometown!