语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中词汇表达灵活多样,学术词汇的使用还需加强。
It is not wise to Draw a conclusion immediately as you see or hear of what happend In our daily life,there are always some people around there who have their specific views for things that should have an reasonable answer.However,It's not always understood well by others when you give your opinion to question quickly. For example,Here has one who is my classmate and he likes to states his perspective at once on those questions that come out around us and were heard by him.but,everytime the idea to question from him is not always good as others was thinking how to give a suitable solution.So,It gives an evidence of drawing a conclusion immediately that almost is not wise. For another example,there is another one who is my best friend and he loves to show his perspective as question happend too.while,his way to know question is different from the one before,he likes to observe objects which happend around him.but there is the same result for the perspective that they show to question. Thus,We can draw a conclusion that no matter how you get the information,please consider it carefully or diligently before you want to make a choice to express your views to question or everything will be done unwisely
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