小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a friend. She is a girl, her name is Xiaoxiao.She has a round face and two big eyes .She has curly long hair .She likes English and maths.She is a working hard girl. She is kind . I like her very much. I think everyone who sees her will like her soon .