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it is universally acknowledged that thinking twice before leap.so we can easily understand that it is unwise that drawing a conclusion immediately when you see or hear something.now we can find the factors from many sides and people. from the students' perspective ,if we do decide what to do on hearing or seeing what happen,the first drawback is that may give us a bad habit and most situations lead to bad grades.and then we may not see the key of solving problems.the last one is that we can lead a serious result which may do damage to the people around you. from the country's point of view ,it may can give us an illusion that the situation is good.and it is bad for us to establish a good relationship with others it is important ,therefore,for us that we should do a thought when we determine something.and we should know that we are not so smart that we need thinkng
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