2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

As is known to us all, today in china, many families have only one child with the family planning. Thus a lot of children are babied by their family members. And some of them become more and more depend on others. Apparently, this is a bad phenomenon. Therefore how could parents help children to be independent? Different people have different view. In my opinion, firstly, parents should give their children the freedom to make choices for themselves. Parents ought to trust their children and believe they can handle their own things. Secondly, parents are supposed to cultivate children’s ability to do some work by themselves, only in this way, can children solve problem alone. Finally, parents must communicate with their children equally, and then, parents can give the child enough help to make them feel comfortable. In a nutshell, parents do not expend all energy on their children. Take it easy, the child would be better!