作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中用词稍显贫乏,在词汇拼写也要再接再厉;请注意分段。
Those who feel unhappy just because they have a good memory,said wang .It is sensable.If one person can forget all the unhappy things and start again,then everyday is another day,but can we do that.Sometimes,it is hard for people to forgive those who hurt them,to forget means to forgive sometimes.As for me,of course,I hope I can be a positive person,forgeting all unhappy things.