高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown was especially beautiful in the past.My hometown was surrounded by trees.It was clearly that also can seen fish playing in the river.There used to have simple houses and narrow streets.People working life of the poor;But now,a forest of Factory shops in my hometown.Great and small cars riding in the streets.With the development of the industry,the environment is becoming worse and worse.With the decreased trees,the fish gradually disappeared.Pollution control is the most urgent.