小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

she is my good friend. because she helps me a lot .and i love her. when i am sad , she comforts me . when i am happy ,she sings and dances with me . once I broke my arm , and then i was send to the hospital . but she didn't come . i felt so depressed . but whatever , maybe something happens to her . after all, this was 10 miles away from our school . I think she is my best friend . and i will love her forever.