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作文题目:
The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community.
Use specific details in your discussion.
政府声称计划建新学校。有人认为在社区比较适合。对比一下在社区建学校的优缺点。
字数要求:300字以内。
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识掌握的错误，可适当增加从句的使用；作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但有个别拼写错误。
I do not think my community is suitable for an university to be established,neverthless I agree with that the community could obtain the tremendous profits if there were an university in it. First of all,my community lacks sufficient lands to support numerous buildings, constructions and a vast campus for the university,or govenment has to move tens of thousands of families to other communities or even other cities from the place where they have lived for decades to provide the new university with space.In addition to the insufficient lands,the location is another vital factor to considerate.As we know,the community is located in the remote rural area without perfect intergration of the transport system, especially the convenient mass transit. However,on the other hand,establishing a new university leads to a great deal of adventages we can imagine and foresee.Firstly,our community would see a rapid incline in literacy if this plan were to be implemented.Secondly,once there is a university in our community,the state must grant huge amounts of money in improving the transportation.Besides the former adventages,economic advance is also attractive.
