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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12932
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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全文结构较为严谨;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

用户练习作文:

It is computer and mobile phone that become a important necisseties of life.More and more people communication with friends and family rather electronic communication than face-to-face contact. First of all,the tools of electronic communication have been developing beter and beter in past years.People can be a faster communication than face-to-face contact.Second, as a great memmber of youth leaves from their hometown, families have to be separated with each other .Families could contact with each other by electronic when the want. Last, electronic communication can reduce the embarrass between the strangers. on the other hand, more informations have been neglected when people contact with electronic communication.For excample, you could get some informations from the talker's face, tone and body lauguage when you contact face-to-face. To sum up, the electronic communication for the convenience of our life, but that can't replace face-to-face contact.

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