2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。

With the development of science and technology,people increasingly have a convenient life.For example,people would like to go shopping on the Internet rather than go to the supermarket.So,online shopping gradually become more significant,even become the part of our life. Of course,online shopping not only bring convenience to us,but also exit a lot of troubles to consumers.For instance,It is difficult to ensure the quality of products.Besides,there are enormous danger when you pay off.So,how to protect consumers is a serious problem to solve. As far as I am concerned,when we purchase something in the Internet,we should ensure the quality of the goods again and again.In addition,we should choose the legal ways to pay the money.I am sure that only in this way can we live a better life when we go shopping on the Internet.