2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

with the quicking pace of life ,it is well know that computer become more and more prevanlent,which become a part of our life.a growing number of people use the computer.computer brings us much more. there are many factors in this phnomeon.to begin with,We cannot leave computer no matter work or life.computer make us comunicate with each other and we can make friends.if you want to buy something,then you just need on the internet.computer offer much convenient.it is save our time.what's more ,The world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today.computer play a significant role in our life.we can learn something from internet. therefore,When I surfed and chatted on the Internet, it never occurred to me that I might become a part of a new international trend.We need to reasonable use the computer. not only in the office,but also at home.only in this way can can we get useful something.