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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识掌握的错误,可适当增加从句的使用;词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

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Nowadays,along with the rapid evolution of various kinds of media,such as network,our daily lives are becoming much easier to be filled with all sorts of information,which we cannot tell whether they are right or wrong.Therefore,it is really common for us students to draw conclusions once we see something or hear something,since we are in lack of social experiences staying in campus nearly all the time. Obviously,it is unwise to come to conclusions immediately when we know something,because under the most situations we don't know exactly what happens.Besides, there may be some people spreading wrong information on purpose through many ways that could misleading us.Thus if we simply trust people or things around us without any opinion of our own,then it would be very dangerous not only for us but also for other persons. Then,what should we do to avoid being wrong-guided?As far as I am concerned,first of all,we must improve our ability to tell and choose the right things.Second,we should not conclude anything or randomly discuss something before we figure it out.Last but not least,think more seriously before you give any answer to something.

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