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It is unwise to put all eggs in one backet For us Chinese,it is well known that a rabit will build three house to avoid danger.It give us the same inspiration that it is unwise to put all eggs in one backet.If we do put all eggs in a backet,in case breaking,what will be left for us. When we deal with or decide,therefor,what is extremely important,we should think twice and come up with more than one way to solve the problem.If we only have one idea,we may meet the difficulty that it doesn't work,then what shall we do.just wait the result and accept the failure?So more approaches to problem is the key to success.And since we are not a rabit,how can we prepare one way for us.Of course,it is not absolute,if we only have one we to success,we should hazard breaking all eggs to succeed. all in all,we should be aware of that the way to Rome is not one,and we can solve the problem in many other ideas.
