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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8984
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

用户练习作文:

It is universally acknowledged that it is unwise to judge one person by his apperance.If we do judge person by apperance ,for one thing,it will give you wrong message,for another,it will have a bad effect on establishing a good relationship with others.Now we can expain the resons below. Firstly,from our students' point of view,judging a person by apperance may lead us to make evil friends who have a good looking barely but have a bad inner.In addition,it can damage the relationship with other.From people's perspective,it will not be good for booming and getting much useful experience from others.it may ruin ourselves over time. In my opinion,we should judge one person by what he can do and what feats he can complish.Only in that way can we get the right person to help us get somewhere.And it is what we need to establish a relationship.

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