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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40863
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;请加强词汇表达的多样性,但请注意检查拼写的拼写。

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we always think that it is ture what we saw.then we will tell it to somebody,and one by one it willbe know by exeryone whatever if it true.however do you know it is unwise to make a decision when you saw or listened somethings.if you like to talk about gossip,it very dangerous to tell some informations you have saw,because if the things not like you think and it not ture,your words can be let some one angry,even upset. I had heard a story like that a girl was a friend with lili,they hated a same girl who was their classmate xiaoli.one day this girl saw lili talked with xiaoli ,and she thought lili betraied her,so she argued with lili and said we were not friends any more,you were make me sick,you and her are real friends,but lili just told somethings about class,and teacher asked her did it,however they are not friends any more.if that girl asked lili why she tolk with xiaoli,knowing the truth.maybe they are friends still. in my opinion,whatever you saw or heard,you can not make a decision at once if you not sure that is true,.

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