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A Summer holiday Recently our class had a discussion about what they would do in the comming summer vacation,here is the result. Tina said she would go to Beijing for vacation.She went there last year and fell in love with it.Tina plans going to Beijing to see some beautiful sights,like the Great Wall,Summer Palace and visit Beijing Hutong.She said she enjoyed the food there and people there were friendly and funny.But not all the students want to go to other places for vacation.Jim want to spend the whole vacation at home.he said he would feel tired if he went out and he just want to have a good rest.For me,I also choose to stay at home ,but the reason why I don't wanna go outside is not the same as Jim's.I think the weather is too hot to go out and have fun.
