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2011年2月19日雅思大作文真题:Whether women can join the army?

发布时间:2013-07-24 16:43浏览次数:1236
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【题目要求

Some people believe that women should play anequal role as men in a country’s police force or military force,such as the army, while others think women are not suitable forthese kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give youropinion.

【题目翻译】

一些人认为妇女应该在国家的警察或军队中与扮演与男性平等的角色,而另外一些人则认为妇女不适合这些工作。讨论双方观点并且给出你的观点。

话题分类与题型

本题为新题,仍为“老题新出”,属于社会类话题中“男女平等”分支。题型为Argumentation。

话题评价

男女平等是雅思写作社会类话题中的一个重要分支之一,最近一次考查这个话题是在2011年1月15日,问的是工作中的男女平等。短短一个月内重复考类似话题的现象并不罕见,因此考生在复习写作话题的时候一定要全面,不要迷信预测。

男女平等话题也是口语考试的重点,在本次考试的口语考试中就直接有相关题目的考查,因此建议考生复习该话题的时候把写作和口语结合在一起复习。

这次考题与03年9月20日和04年1月10日的话题几乎完全一致,只是题型稍有不同,但写作方法完全一样。雅思写作其实已经早已没有新题了,现在几乎每次的考题都是从老题改写而来,只是改写幅度不同而已。 

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1.In many countries women are not able to join thearmy. But some people think women should be a member of the army, navy and airforce. Do you agree or disagree? (030920,040110)

2. Throughout history, male leaders always lead us toviolence and conflict. If a society isgoverned by female leaders it will be morepeaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagreewith this opinion?

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作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用学术词汇;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Now, more and more areas including the army have been opened to females. Some TV dramas also feature female's role in the swat team or in the army. Not only that, females can now chose a wide range of positions in the army. And facts showed that, females can play as well as males or even better in the army or police. But still, the fact that army or police has to face violence are commonly thought to be unsuitable for the female. I think that women should be allowed to join the army or police, but they should not be the main force to confront violence, both for the sake of themselves and for their male comrades. From the perspective of gender equality, women should share the duty of defending their country as men usually do. Enrolling women in the army also inspires the male to be brave to protect the women, also present the soldier with some chances of communicating with the female in case of the male chauvinism after their retirement. Having the female in the army can make the exercises or missions less boring and more effective, as males are masculine, females are exquisite, they complete each other. On top of that, some female soldiers would get marry in th army, which will ease the career concern of some male officers. But on the other hand, the brutal nature of war or conflict determines that women are not suitable for this kind of career. First and foremost, women are weak in physical strength, that means they are in a disadvantageous position and readily be hurt or destroyed. Which in turn will cause trouble for males to take care of, and the fighting capability will be eliminated. What's even worse, once they get seized, they might be raped or sexual abused, which will impose tremendous pressure from the public on the government. To conclude, I think that women should have the right to join the army or police, but they should be informed about the potential danger prior, and not all positions are suitable for them.

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