2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

If you think you are right when you make a I have my own room, but it is different from my dreaming room. My dreaming room is not too big or too small. There is a big and soft bed in it. Beside the bed there is a dressing table. On the other side, there is a big wardrobe. I can hang up all my clothes. There is a beautiful writing desk for me to do homework. Behind the desk there is a place to put many entertainment tools. And the wall of my room is pink. This is my dreaming room.