2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；作者学术词汇方面要多累积，词汇表达不够丰富；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

Do you still worry about in which place can we buy something?Take it easy,you don't have to do that，today we have a new way to shoping-----Online Shoping. In this way,you don't need to worry about where you can buy,you only have to sat at home ,then open your computer and the web site.You can see many commodities in it,it is so easy for us. But it also has some disadvantages.First,you can't see it,hear it,teast it and touch it in person.Then, you may be deceived. In my view,Online Shopping has both advantages and disadvantages.We can combine the virtual and reality,and we will have a good time.