小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.Her name is Echo. She is a beatiful girl.Her hair is black.Her eye is blue.She lives in America.She is tall and thin.She likes singing.She likes playing ping-pong.She always eats bananas at night.She is good at dancing.Her family has three people,her mother,her father.After school,she always help others.