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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1782
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

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用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用学术词汇。

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It is essential that everyone need to look out the fittest approach to acquire knowledge effectively and efficiently,and once they found the suitable learning method,they would benefit significantly from it certainly throughout their rest lifes.As for me,I prefer to study along than to study in a group such as seminars with other students. First of all,I have been studied along for ages and get used to it,namely I developing it as my unchangeable custom.If someone required me to give up such custom and melt into a group,I could not study for a minute.Secondly,the study is a complex activities attached to our intellect in which we have to use our inductive reasoning and other comprehensive logic abilities,so our people must press ahead with such process focusing on it. And we would find out one vital shortcoming of the studying in the group when we compare the former with the latter.When we stay in a crowd of people,we can't help chatting with others and unfortunately we are unable to get rid of it because it is one of the instinctions of our humanity.As a result,we cannot pay our whole attention to the work we are going to do.

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