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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1781
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

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As we all know, different people have different way in the study. However, which way do you like the most? study alone or study with a group? In my oppion, l perfer study with a group, because only in this way can l totally concentrate on my study. when l was in high school l always study alone and my grades are always very bad, but l can't find the reason why so. And now, after l enterd into the university l get a partenal l come to realise that my study was inefficient because l have no one to mentioned me to study. l konw l am not a student who always have a positive in study. In other words, l perfer study with a group because l need help from group.

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