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ok.i think it is important to study english .for example ,we all like to listen to music ,right?such as english songs,and most of us are love English stars.so ,we'd better to learn english better. First,we must remember english words ,the more the better.so that we can wriet good sentence. Second ,we can read english articai everyday.