新东方托福高分作文:我居住的城市的优缺点

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If someone wants to come to my city for a better life,I would encourage him or her but with little care,because every coin has its two sides but sometimes it shows the up side I guess. For living in ChengDu,my city,to begin with,there is no denying that it is one of the most funny city in the world.I am not overstating but it is the truth.The merits far outweigh the disadvantages.You can eat so many snacks in this city ,and also go sightseeing to experience different customes of different ethnic groups.Needless to say,one man could not fail to have fun in ChengDu city.Every foreigner I have met always regards ChengDu as the paradise for the venturers. And secondly,the temperature here is wonderful.It will not be too hot in summer time and also be warm during winter,and it makes sure that there are four eseasons in one year so you will not miss any happiness and experience of the certain season.Of course ,due to the nature character here,the women are always beautiful and amazing. Lastly but most important somehow,is the food.Every distinguished cook in China could not neglect the cuishin in SiChuan Province,and in SiChuan,ChengDu's food is most famous.Even for the noodles,there are so many types for you to choose.Such as YiBing Hot noodles or the Throwing noodles,each of them is very yummy and not so that in high price.You will not cost very much for a wonderful meal.On a futher note,when you taste the typical and delicious food,the service would not let you down.People here are all hospitalized ,and in fact ,they are honest.The quality of food productions in ChengDu city is the topest in China.It is not exaggeration,if you come and see it,you will think the same.So,due to the attitudes and the high-qualitied food,ChengDu will sometimes named after the City of Food in China. But ,somehow,there are some disadvantages.For the wet weather,some people will be trapped in the skin disease.But do not worry,it will not last too long.And the food is too hot,some could not bear its style.So some do not have the tendency to live in my city.Nevertheless,ChengDu could not cater for everyone,so this phenomenon is not serious essentially but worth of underdstanding. So for the reasons above,I could definitely recommend that people come and live in ChengDu for a mariculous life feeling.I insist my city will give them a unforgettable experience during their life span.