2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

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Is it wise for students to part-time jobs Nowadays , a noun , part-time job, is popular in college campus .More and more students choose a part-time job in the university. And in my opinion, I think it is wise for students to take of part-time jobs. On one hand , it is good for students themselves. Firstly ,it is a chance for students to improve their abilities .During the jobs ,they may find themselves lack of patience and courage Secondly , there is lots of freedom time for students during college. Therefore students can make sue of time through take a part-time job . In addition , taking a part-time job is an effective approach for us to get better understanding about society . Students can experience the complicated of the world outside ahead . At least when I was during college, I tried to have a job to be a waitress and I often made mistakes . Of course , my boss always helped me solve the the troubles I also saw something unfair in society and have to adjust myself to adapt it. On the other hand , students will understand their parents’ hardship and how great their parents are . What’s more , the money students earned can not only let students knew the money is not easy to win and value money , but also can easy parents’ burden. In a word there are many benefits about part-time jobs. So I think it is a good choice for students to have a part-time job in college.