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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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What will happen if everybody loses their heart in believing somebody else?That will be threatening without doubt.Although you will be involved into a fraud during the process of trusting others,you can find the virtual of human nature and honest person.So the merits balance the disadvantages and even far outweigh the bad sides. Firstly,the main reason for my opinion is one could not succeed without others' help.But once you want to get help from others,you must believe that they will give you a helping hand,right?If you don't maintain trust for them in your deep mind,you will miss their warm hearts.And that will make feel bad,because what you see is the darkest parts of the world,and even your tragic imagination. Secondly,trusting somebody gives us a sense of home and belonging.When you are in the balance,the one you trust could instruct you and encourage you without mock or curse.The most vital thing is the feeling of love instead of the things useful you could get from them.So with the belief in heart,your world will never be the polar night. The last one,somehow the most important,when you have good impressions and prospects for others,they will do the same for you.Because of your trust,they even may get a good day in high tension.You may give them courage,or you could correct their wrong ideas that the world is trash.You could light up their faces and tell them the world and the people here are not so unfavorable.Trust does not only give your energy but also makes others vibrant. So,due to the reasons above,I insist that people trust each other without hesitation.You may confront with deception,but it will last long.Have a faith that the when you smile at the world,the world will give you a hug in turn.

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