2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays ,a noun ,part-time job, is popular in campus.More and more students choose a part-time job in the university. And in my opinion, I think it is wise for students to take of part-time jobs. On the one hand,it is good for students.Firstly,it is an opportunity for students to improve their abilities.During the jobs ,they may find themselves lack of patience and courage Secondly , there is lots of leisure time for students during college.Therefore students can make use of time by taking a part-time job.In addition, taking a part-time job is an effective approach for us to understand better about society.Students can experience the complicated of the world outside ahead.At least when I was during college,I tried to have a job to be a waitress and I often made mistakes.Of course,my boss always forgave and helped me solve the the troubles.My growth is that I could saw something unfair in society and have to adjust myself to adapt it. On the other hand,students will understand their parents’ hardship and how great their parents are.What’s more , the money students earned can not only let students realized the money is not easy to win and value money , but also can easy parents’ burden. In a word there are many advantages about part-time jobs.So I think it is a good choice for students to have a part-time job in college.