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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9039
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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Nowadays, with the rapid economical development,more and more people lead a cozy and happy life,however,an increasing number of people do not really know how to make life meaningful and worthy.but the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. Just as an old saying goes that we can not control how long we live,but we can do something that is benifit for others.In my opinion,doing sth. for the people in diffulty can make life outlast it. When it comes to how to implement it for myself,firstly,I would study hard in the universaty in store for the building of our country.And at my spare time,Iwould volunteer to do some service,such as going to see the old and loney people and visiting some children whose parents leave them home.Of course,on summer or winter vacation,I would go to school to teach the cute students in elementry school. To sum up,we should do something make our life meaningful,then we would lead a happy life.

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