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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home . Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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From the traditional point of view, employees have to go to their workplace to initiate the daily job. But things have changed dramatically in terms of how and where morden employees are working. An ncreasng number of employees, especially those in the IT or design industry, can now enjoy their woking without leaving home. This not only offer employees with more free choices of allocating their time, but also ease the traffic conjestion and air pollution.
