2013考研英语二图表作文预测:出生率和婴儿死亡率

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From what is demonstrated in the above bar chart,we can observe distinctly that during the past several years, the life expectancy and infant mortality experienced some changes.From 1960 to 1990,the life expectancy increased from 40 years old to roughly 60 years old.During the same period,the rate of infant mortality decreased from approximately 20% to 10%. The bar chart informs us of the phenomenon that people can live longer nowadays. What do accurately contribute to this phenomenon?Three reasons can be available.In the first place,it is with the improvement of living standard that elderly people in mounting numbers are placing a high value on health care.Consequently,people can live longer than ever before.When it comes to the decline of the rate of infant mortality,it can be attributed to the improvement of medical technology.Many emergencies and incurable diseases can be cured at current,which means that less infant will suffer from fatal diseases and can lead a longer life. In the second place,during the recent years,people have a nice circumstances that folks focus on it.In the third place,most of people who have a good body pay attention to do athletics. Rising life expectancy and decline of infant mortality is a symbol of social progress and economic development.However,it will also bring about some undesirable consequences such as the aging of population.Therefore,the issue of how to cope with it should be on agenda.