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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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How to Understand the Unemploment Rate and Earning Connection With? According to the date, we would find unemployment rate and median weekly earning has something connection with in inner. The date show us that the more degree the more earnings or the more degree the less unemploment rate. This is our one conclusion. Can we find anything from it? We should contiunous annalyze this date. Wether you has got more degree, you would pay more education pays, so the government get more money to creat employment. On the other hand, you could get more salary if you had got high degree. All in all, develop education is our country most important point!

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