2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

How to Understand the Unemploment Rate and salary Connection With? According to date, we would find unemployment rate and median weekly earning have something connection with inner. The dates show us that the more degree the more earnings or the more degree the less unemployment rate. This is our conclusion. Can we find anything from it? We should contiunes analyze it.You would pay more education pays Wether you has got more degree, so the government get more money to create employment. On the other hand, you could get more salary if you had got high degrees. All in all, advance education is our country most important point!