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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

In our true life, it is frequent that some persons judge a other person by their appearance. They always show their personality feeling and recommend other depend on the first-sight. Obviously, there is no doubt that it is a stupid behavior. Because a personal appearance doesn't mean his or her quality and all, we can estimate a person just for the looks. Otherwise, judge a person by their appearance will bring about several error when we make friend. On the one hand, if we make friend, which will be influenced by their looks, it seem that we know a person go through the fog. It limit our vision and thinking. On the other hand, when we come into being dislike or some unwise thinking for others, we will keep a distance to them. However, one day we also will be kept a distance, because we didn't receive others appearance. Everybody is unique, the appearance doesn't have the beauty and ugliness, so don't judge a person by their looks.

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