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字数：300 满分：100分
文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；能够使用一些不错的从句；作者在学术词汇方面还有很大的空间，还要注意单词拼写。
Do We Need Thifty? Many people who possess a large of money never tell their children to be thifty.As a reasult, the children don't have the conception of thifty, and they spend hundrens of money in clothes, food, having fun and other expeniture. However, in my opinion, that is absurd. Several reasons contribute to my mind, but I only state 2 aspects which I think is important.First of all, this behavor is easy to cause of the comparing with others.If someone is little better than him in one thing, he will become anxious enough so that it is hard for him to concentrate his mind to study, becoming best instead. what's more, one day, when they have grown up, how can himself offer so much expeniture? Because of degeneration when young, they don't have enough ability to be compentent to high-salary job.Is his parents going to offer money needed by him all the life? To sum up, it is unsuitable to teach thier children to spend much money that wouldn't have been needed, because the disadvantages are so big that can engulf the advanges.
