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With the developing of the Internet，our life become more and more colorful.At the same time,online shopping become a fashion,an increasing number of people are beginning to select online shopping to buy what they want to.Because of online shopping,our lives has changed a lot. As is known to all,since having online shopping,shopping becomes convenient and freedom.We need not step out of the room and only according to our liking or need to pick up .In addition to,we can through the online shopping to buy clothes more cheaper than buying in shopping plaza.But it’s necessary for us to pay addition.If you are careless，you may meet some trouble like that the color of you buy is different to what you watch on computer. There is no denying the fact that online shopping give a big change to our lives,and we should through it make our lives more beauful.
