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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:教育 Education

发布时间:2013-07-05 14:49浏览次数:1077
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of international students from four areas of the world who came to study at university level in a western country in 2000 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;请注意分段。

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In year 2000, the number of international students from China is the largest, and the number of international students from India is the second, and the number of international students from Brazil was the lowest. In year 2005, the number of international students from China is also the largest, and the number of international students from India is also the second, but the number of international students from Japan is the lowest. The numbers of international students from China and Japan in year 2005 are lower than those in year 2000, which almost decreased over 30% percents. However, the numbers of international students from India and Brazil are larger than those in year 2000. The number of international students from Brazil increased four times, and the number of international students from India only increased a little.

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