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With the developing of the Internet，our lives become more and more colorful.At the same time,online shopping becomes a fashion,and an increasing number of people are beginning to select online shopping to buy what they want to.Because of online shopping,our lives have changed a lot. As is known to all,since having online shopping,we trade becomes convenient and freedom.We need not step out of the room and only according to our liking or need to pick up.In addition,we can through the online shopping to buy clothes much cheaper than buying in shopping plaza.But it’s necessary for us to pay attention to.If you are careless，you may meet some trouble like that the color of you buy is different to what you watch on computer. There is no denying the fact that online shopping give a big change to our lives,and we should through it make our lives more beautiful.
