For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .
You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量。
“Nothing is really beautiful except for the beauty of mind.”I believe that most of us have heard this sentence before,however,the minority of us who already know it could not really understand it’s meaning or truly take serious about it.And the truth is that nowadays there are more and more people becoming concerning about their appearance rather than characteristics,and what’s worse is that there are even some people willing to do anything to make themselves prettier. As far as I am concerned,we must realize that our outlooks are not the most important.For one thing,our appearance cannot exist as soon as we died,however,our ideas could last forever in other people’s memories which actually means something.For another,our outlooks are given by our parents and should be considered to be a gift from them,therefore we have to accept this gift since we love and respect our parents. All in all,it’s meaningful for us to learn that the real beauty is determined by our mind and our heart instead of our appearance.And our life would not become much easier just because we have better outlooks,on the contrary,we can change our life by changing our attitudes towards it as well as our ideas about it.Thus accept who we are and what we look like simply,we will be happier every day.