2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In china, I like beijing most, because it's the capital of our country,and have many,interingplace,such as,gugong,tiananmen,the great wall .Tiananmen is very big ,and gugong has many hostary ,the great wall is very long.We are prould of it ,and I think I can describe it for my friend,our country has many hestory,I tkink my friend will like it.