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As the old saying goes:one can not be a millioner in one night.With the development of the world,everone are trying their best to make money in order to live a happy life.Of course,as we a a college student the magority of whoes are supported by our parents are certainly need to be a smart consumer. In my opinion, firstly,we should careful with our money in daily life .Such as bought something what we need in our daily life as cheap as possible if not very important.It is a effect way for our money-saving.Besides,we also could do some part-time jobs or make some business as possible as we can.It not only increase our money,but also practice our ability of all kinds. In biief,only we save money aas well as make money ,can we be a good consumer and live a good life.
