【题目要求】
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.【题目分析】
同意或者不同意,都是错误的。不结合具体情况,无法判断哪一个更好。先比较两种沟通方式的优缺点(relative merits)然后根据不同的情况说明那种方式更好:跟老板、同事沟通,face-to-face communication更好;跟愤怒的投诉顾客,telephone更好一些;跟情人沟通,当然face-to-face更好。
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
There are amounts of types of communication in the modern world.Some people believe that face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls.Otherwise I don't agree it completely. From my point of view,I consider it necessary for us to communicate with someone who is really significant for us such as family or love partner in person.What's more we'd better to talk to colleagues or discuss with our boss face-to-face.On the other hand,when we need to deal with embarrassing situations it would be better by email or telephone and so forth.For example,to handle a complaint or to do an apologise you 'd better choose telephone or email or letter. Above all mentioned,we need to learn to choose the right way to communicate in variety circumstances.