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2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:13浏览次数:2274
要求:
Government money should support more important things rather than artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作思路
第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段:科学研究与社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如科技,教育,医疗。但是这些只能满足人们的物质需求。
第三段:政府需要投资艺术,因为:
1. 人类有多重的需求,艺术是表达感情和思想的渠道,原始社会就有艺术形式的存在。艺术不活跃,导致思想僵化,科技和经济发展迟滞。高度文明的社会总是伴随着繁荣的文化和艺术
2. 艺术和文化有地域特点,是国家团结的一个纽带
3. 艺术提供看世界的多重视角,培养人的创造和创新能力
第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会.
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文中词汇使用灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;请注意分段。

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Language is to daily life what foundation is to a skyscraper. Everyone says or listens to hundreds of words every day. Some citizens argue that this world should have one single international language while others assert that it would have negative effects on protecting cultural identities. In this essay, I will discuss the two views from the following aspects, and then put up my own opinion. 66 One single international language contains many superiorities. To begin with, it is conducive to solving local work or projects. One example can suffice to illustrate this point. Clearly, there is a growing tendency for English language to occupy a dominant place as an international language. Australia government provides international labours, who can not only speak English but also have related skills, numerous working visas for the sake of tackling the lack of labours every year. Another merit of a single international language is that it can help youngsters gain valuable and valuable and valued skills or knowledge. For instance, students who were born in developing countries can have an opportunity to study overseas in a better university with well-equipped facilities and well-known professors in order to widen our sight and gain study experience. 133 However, the other side of the coin voices its strong opposition, saying that it would be difficult to preserve cultural characteristics if there was a single international language. Apparently, many cultural heritages are associated with their own languages. If people spoke one single international language rather than their first languages, individuals could not understand the full meaning of the cultural relics what our ancestors wanted to express even though they were displayed in the measure. In my view, I would like to take a more balanced position. We would be well-advised to speak a single international language due to the benefits, not only tackling the lack of local labours also gaining precious experience. However, we should not, notwithstanding, overlook our cultural identities which could be recorded with international language so as to help descendents preserve cultural characteristics.

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