2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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It is a wisedom decision to you to visit my hometown. At first,i should express the sincerely welcome to you.As a Chinese,I am every honourable that set down in the Beijing.As is known that Beijing is the political and enconomic centre of China.So,it is a great spot to travel. Of course,there are many interesting places you can visit.But,the most popularity sight, I think, is the Great wall.It as the one of the eight miracles of the world.it is still appeal to a lot of people.So,we have a sayings:You are not a hero if you do not go to the Great wall,which lead to many people want to try .The Great wall was founded in the Min dynasty,which was used to resisting the enemy.It is located in the norther part of China and stretchs for 8851.8 killometers. As one of the greatest construction in the history of human civilization,the Great wall has provide the majoroty of helps and cultural heritages to human beings.