2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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It is a wisdom decision to visit my hometown. Firstly,I should express the sincerely welcome to you.As a Chinese,I am every honourable to set down in the Beijing.As is known that Beijing is the political and economic centre of China.So,it is a great spot to improve your knowledge. Of course,there are many interesting places you can visit.But,the most popular sight, I think, is the Great wall.As the one of the eight wonders of the world.it is still appealing to a lot of people.So,we have a sayings that You are not a hero if you do not go to the Great wall,which lead to many people want to try .The Great wall was founded in the Min dynasty,which was used to resisting the enemy.It is located in the norther part of China and stretches for 8851.8 kilometers. As one of the great construction in the history of human civilization,the Great wall has provided the majority of helps and cultural heritages to human beings.