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有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；从句使用熟练；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。
Of money Nowadays, lots of people deam that it is good habit to save money,while the other consider they needn't save even can use tomorrow's money. After weighting the asserts and disasserts, I think we should save our money. I have several reasons to maintain my view. First of all, thrity is our traditional customs which we shouldn't give up. influented on the tradition, people will scorn on those who consume their money apart all the costs away. Moreover, if we have already run out of all the tomorrow's money, what can we do when we meet the situation where we need a large of fortune? If we do go into that day, what terrible it is! So, for our future, to make ourselves have some wealth to use, please save money when we can now, or you will be sorry, which is so tardy!
