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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:环境 Environment

发布时间:2013-07-10 16:40浏览次数:1237
要求:

The graph contains information about the population of birds in Europe over a period of twenty four years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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文中从句数量过少;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,且检查文中的拼写错误。

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What are the feature about the population of birds from 1977 to 2001. I must say it is spliding down in quality totally, though now it is not so fast like the earlier of 80s. In fact from 1977 to 1980, the population of birds were growing up. but since that it went down in a hardly speed untill 1986. then a slow booming in the next three years. from 1989 to 1992, it declined again. the next climb was in a very slime number. in 1995, it got another decrase. and the worst is that since 1995, we didn't see any good news.

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