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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17430[网页划词已开启]
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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With the development of digital technology and the progress of human society,our life has been more and more closely associated with comptures,which really bring about a great deal of effect to our daily activities.For instance,many businessmen always take advantage of it to write some email or estabish documents while students of my age use it to do homework. However,everything has its both sides.Although computers provide us with convenience and speed,it also do some harm to our health.It is a common phenomenon that we see someone around us was addicted to computer games,which influenced his study and damaged his body.Computer is so intelligent machine that once we do not care,we may lose ourselves in it. In my view,it is high time that computer be used pertinently .We ought to bear it in our mind that computer is just a affiliate tool for us to utilize.Only when we recognize this point can we truly lead a easy and healthy life.

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