小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句子错误偏多，建议修改；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

he is very beatiful ,she is very tall and very shin ,he like to make friends and have many goog friends he loves to go to swimming fishing palying basketball she is borned in beijng he very likes go to study and works hardly.i very love her because he is so well