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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国小城镇的用电量

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The picture depicts that a young boy arrives at the final line which is also a symbol of the next point of start. It vividly enlightens us all that when you reach the goal, it is hardly on behalf of the end but much more means that another challenge is waiting for you to overcome. Life is a same as travel, passing one landmark after another, so we keep moving. Growth is the best argument that far from staying still, we can’t escape from moving. As all we know, when graduate from high school, we always suspect that it would be the end of painstaking learning period. In fact, it is the beginning of university that means ever more effort we should make to learn professional skill as well as knowledge that help us safely land on job market and arm ourselves with confidence. Additionally, development is also perennial topic in various kinds of domains. Take the consumer electronic as example. It is remarkable when human invented the calculator with large size and complicate operation, but however proud we are, the ascendance would barely satisfy with what we have achieved. Hence, laptop, smartphone, mobile App, video game etc. Occur today. As far as we are concerned, we should make it clearly in mind that success is not merely the an end but also an inflection point requiring us to keep moving.

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